Surrender, New York: A Decade Later โ€“ Part Two

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There are many mysteries that Caleb Carrโ€™s final work of fiction, Surrender, New York, presents to its readers. In Part One of the novelโ€™s 10th anniversary celebration, we explored what is perhaps the most conspicuous of these: the mystery contained within its very title. Specifically, why did Caleb break with his long-established preference for geographical accuracy to create a fictional town and county in upstate New York as the novelโ€™s setting? Although we were able to identify several potential reasons (see Part One), this question ultimately led us to appreciate the care Caleb took in creating a protective distance between the landscape of Surrender and the real region, and its inhabitants, his fictional world was inspired byโ€”a necessary choice given the sensitive themes he was exploring.

These themes therefore lead us to our next logical question: why did Caleb decide to write Surrender, New York in the first place? As we shall discover, the novelโ€™s clear links back to the Alienist books provide an intriguing insight into the answer, but the relationship between these works extends well beyond their shared fictional universe, encompassing several social and scientific concerns that occupied Caleb for the bulk of his career. In Part Two, we will delve into some of these recurring themes more closely to examine how they evolved between the nineteenth-century world of the Alienist novels and the contemporary setting of Surrender, and will learn what their author had to say about their personal importance to him.

N.b. The following post contains major spoilers for The Alienist. I have attempted to keep spoilers at a minimum for Surrender, New York.

A Return to Kreizler’s World

After the film rights to The Alienist were sold in 1993, Caleb spent more than two decades watching attempts to adapt his novel falter, ultimately concluding that prospects were โ€œbleakโ€ for it ever making it to the screen. However, this changed in 2014 when Paramount Television announced plans to develop an adaptation as part of its newly relaunched division. Although excitement for this unexpected development was initially high, especially when Caleb was brought on as a consulting producer, he once again found himself with little creative control over the direction of the project. Speaking to WAMC Radio in 2016, he explained how this proved even more difficult than the initial failed attempts to adapt the novel had been:

It’s been really hard for me. I fought for 20 years to keep a bad movie of The Alienist from being made, and they tried to make many bad movies out of it. It’s hard for me to sit back and watch these people make this TV show without any contribution from me.

It was with the TV adaptation looming that Caleb ultimately decided to find a way to reconnect with the world of his earlier novels on his own terms. But his reasons for doing so through Surrender, New York specifically were twofold, as he went on to explain:

I needed to sort of clear my head and sneak my way back into this world. That’s why we have Trajan Jones being the expert on Kreizler. It was a way to touch base with it without quite going back to it yet. And the other thing that I needed to do was figure out if I could tell a story firsthand from the psychologistโ€™s point of view, because the next two Alienist books will be told from Kreizlerโ€™s point of view.

As we can see, the novel thus served as both catharsis during a challenging time and something of a literary experiment in preparation for Calebโ€™s planned return to the original historical series. However, as he explained in later interviews, his motivation went deeper than this. Beyond the novelโ€™s connection to Kreizlerโ€™s theories, he revealed that Surrender was also โ€œabout as autobiographical as Iโ€™ll ever get.โ€ Speaking to James Altucher, he explained:

I reached a point in my life where I wanted to write something that would give people really close insight into my life without it being blatant. I wanted to return to that idea, get a little closer than the Alienist books did.

On the surface, several of these autobiographical elements seem self-evident. Ranging from its setting at the foothills of the Taconic Mountains (see Part One)โ€”a position close to the location Caleb himself called homeโ€”to the numerous literary and popular culture references he intentionally wove into the work (which we will discuss in Part Three), it is not difficult to see how much of his everyday life found its way into Surrender. Yet perhaps the most revealing autobiographical elements are not those immediately apparent to the reader, but the social questions the novel examines, many of which have their roots in the original Alienist novels.

The Invisible and the Inconvenient

One of Calebโ€™s most enduring concerns was his desire to shine a light on those individuals whom society found easier to overlook than to protect. In The Alienist, this took the form of advocacy for the population the killer was targetingโ€”boy prostitutesโ€”and his frustration with societyโ€™s wilful blindness regarding the plight of this highly vulnerable segment of New Yorkโ€™s social order permeated the book. By the second half of the novel, as the investigative team searched charitable organisations to explore potential avenues the killer may have used to find his victims, narrator John Schuyler Moore becomes ever more furious at the lack of support these boys were receiving:

If I seem either hostile or cynical in recalling this particular phase of our work, perhaps itโ€™s because of a realization that came to me as we reached the end of that second week in June: that the only group of outcasts in the city that didnโ€™t seem to have several privately funded and nobly titled societies dedicated to its care and reform was the very one that was currently in such grave dangerโ€”child prostitutes. As this lack became more and more apparent to me, I couldnโ€™t help but think back to Jake Riisโ€”a man lionized in New Yorkโ€™s philanthropic circlesโ€”and to his blind refusal to admit or report the facts of Georgio Santorelliโ€™s murder. Riisโ€™s deliberate myopia was shared by every official I spoke to, a fact that caused me more irritation every time I encountered it. By the time I came lumbering into Number 808 Broadway late Monday afternoon I was so sick of the fatuous hypocrites who made up New Yorkโ€™s charitable community that I was spewing a steady stream of rather violent curses.

The Alienist, Chapter 38

It should come as no surprise then that the population being targeted in Surrender, New York occupies a similarly unprotected and invisible strata: throwaway children. In several interviews Caleb gave following the novelโ€™s publication, he discussed how he came across this little acknowledged modern classification of abandoned children. For example, in his interview with James Altucher, he said:

I was going through a lot of New York State childcare records, and there kept being repeated this term: throwaway children. Now, I had seen the term โ€œthrown-awaysโ€ [which is] a nicer way of saying kids who have been kicked out of their house by their parents. But throwaway children is this new phenomenon, a relatively new phenomenon, thatโ€™s hit with this grotesquely unequal economy where kids just wake up one day and their families have disappeared and theyโ€™re on their own. They have no idea where theyโ€™ve gone. They canโ€™t find them. Nobody else can find them.

Not unlike the boys in The Alienist, he explained that these children also find themselves with few advocates or support options as they donโ€™t fit systems that have been set up to help. Unable to go to school because they donโ€™t have a family to go home to, and too young to work, their only option is the foster system, which is โ€œthe one thing that no homeless kid wants to do.โ€ But this focus on a neglected segment of society is not the only commonality shared between the books. Given Trajan Jonesโ€™s expertise with Dr. Kreizlerโ€™s theory of context, an important theme in Surrenderโ€”first explored in the Alienist novelsโ€”was the role that trauma plays in the dysfunctional home environments that shape these childrenโ€™s early experiences and perpetuate cycles of abuse and neglect across generations.

The crucial realization in The Alienist was just how vulnerable the boys were who engaged in prostitution, long before they found themselves working in disorderly houses. Joseph, the young boy John befriends during the case, refuses Johnโ€™s offer to find a place for him in Dr. Kreizlerโ€™s institute, despite his intense dislike for his current occupation. Although such a refusal would have been seen by those in philanthropic circles as evidence Joseph wanted to abandon his life to vice, in reality it was the traumatic context of his early life that prevented him from accepting.

But Joseph, orphaned since age three, had already had his fill of institutes, orphanages, and foster homes (not to mention alleyways and empty railroad cars), and nothing I said about Kreizlerโ€™s place being โ€œdifferentโ€ had any effect on him. The Golden Rule had been the only home heโ€™d ever known where he hadnโ€™t been ill fed and beatenโ€”repulsive as she may be, Scotch Ann had an interest in keeping her boys relatively healthy and scar-free. That fact counted for more with Joseph than anything I might say about the placeโ€™s evils and dangers.

The Alienist, Chapter 18

Despite this, it was the tension between these childrenโ€™s suspicion of institutional help and their deep longing to find a โ€œreal friendโ€ who could help them escape their circumstances that ultimately made them vulnerable to predators who knew how to manipulate that trust. In The Alienist, it is once again Joseph who reveals to John that one of the killerโ€™s victims who had been sold to Scotch Ann by his father, โ€œhad been saying for I guess about two weeks that sheโ€™d [heโ€™d] found a saint. Not like a patron saint, in a church, not like thatโ€”just a person who was kind and was going to take her [him] away from Scotch Ann to live with him.โ€ Caleb returned to this idea in Surrender, New York, where we find that the throwaway children come from similarly dysfunctional home environments and, upon being abandoned, are left with few alternatives. During his interview with WAMC Radio, Caleb pointed out:

The thing is the alternatives that theyโ€™re presented with too often are some kind of illegal activity. Thereโ€™s foster care, like I say, on the one hand, or some kind of illegal activity. I mean, youโ€™ve got to make a living somehow. If youโ€™re 13, 14 years old and youโ€™re suddenly alone on the streets and the systemโ€™s not going to take care of you and you donโ€™t want to go into foster care, all too often youโ€™re going to go into prostitution, drug dealing, breaking and entering.

As with the Alienist novels, Surrender takes this exploration of childhood vulnerability one step further, returning to a concept Caleb described as the โ€œFaust Dialecticโ€: the transformation of victim into perpetrator. In doing so, the novel raises an unsettling question about the consequences of systemic neglectโ€”not simply what happens to children whom society fails to protect, but what happens when those children grow up to perpetuate the very exploitation they once endured as a means of survival.

The Corruption of Power and Justice

Of course, the failure of institutions to protect societyโ€™s most vulnerable was not the only recurring theme in Calebโ€™s work. Equally troubling was the corruption of those wielding political power or entrusted with administering justice, particularly when inconvenient truths threatened established interests. We see both at play in The Alienist when the team discovers that they have made a โ€œwide variety of powerful enemiesโ€ through their investigation. In addition to the cityโ€™s powerbrokers, who did not want to see unrest stirred up over the murders within the immigrant population from which the killer was drawing his victims and the powerbrokers drew their workers, we eventually discover why representatives of both the Catholic and Episcopal churches, accompanied by former police officers (who were kicked off the force for corruption by reformers), were paying off the parents of the victims in exchange for their silence, as John explains to Kreizler:

โ€œThey [the priests] werenโ€™t covering for the murderer. They were never concerned about the murderer. It was the reaction among the immigrants that had them spooked. [Archbishop] Corriganโ€™s afraid that theyโ€™ll get angry enough to listen to Kelly and his socialist friendsโ€”angry enough to stop showing up on Sunday and coughing up what little money they have. Basically, the manโ€™s afraid he wonโ€™t get to finish his damned cathedral, and all the other little holy projects heโ€™s probably got planned.โ€

โ€œBut what about [Bishop] Potter?โ€ Kreizler asked. โ€œYou told me yourself that the Episcopals donโ€™t have many adherents among the immigrants.โ€

โ€œThatโ€™s right,โ€ I said, smiling a bit. โ€œThey donโ€™t. But they have something even more profitable, and Iโ€™m an ass for not remembering it. Perhaps Mr. Morgan would be willing to tell youโ€โ€”I turned toward the big walnut desk and found Morgan staring back at me uncomfortablyโ€œโ€”who the largest slum landlord in New York is?โ€

The Alienist, Chapter 30

A similar, though not identical, tension appears in Surrender, New York, withcorruption inside the foster care system and law enforcement playing an important role in the events that transpire within the book. In Calebโ€™s interview with James Altucher, he was particularly critical of what he regarded as the financial exploitation of vulnerable children, including so-called throwaway children, within the foster care system:

Everybody knows that the foster program now is so corrupt that it’s basically, you know, itโ€™s a money-making scheme. Thereโ€™s a few exceptions, and I donโ€™t mean to insult the people who are exceptions, but by and large, the foster care system is a mess. Our childcare system in New York State is a mess.

As with the religious and political institutions portrayed in The Alienist, the underlying concern was not simply that systems intended to serve and protect were failing in their responsibilities, but that financial interests could actively undermine the welfare of the very people those systems were established to help. And this leads directly to the final theme Surrender shares with the Alienist novels, although Calebโ€™s treatment of this particular subject differs significantly between the two works, reflecting the 120 years that separate their settings.

The Illusion of Forensic Certainty

In Surrender, New York, the examination of institutional corruption is not limited to the foster care system; questions are also raised about what happens when forensic science ceases to be financially and intellectually independent of those directly responsible for investigating and prosecuting crimes. This is where the contrast with the Alienist novels, in which forensic science was in its infancy, is most apparent. In addition to early profiling, the investigative team in the original books employ a variety of forensic techniques that were only emerging in the 1890s. These included methods that would later become mainstream such as dactyloscopy (fingerprint identification) and ballistics, along with those that did not find empirical support, such as optography, which involved an attempted retrieval of the last image seen by the retina before death. An important component of the novels was the use of these various techniques to support Dr. Kreizlerโ€™s profiling efforts, even though many were not admissible in courts of law, much to the team’s frustration.

The concerns regarding forensic science raised in Surrender are therefore quite different. Over the course of the intervening century, several of the techniques used in the original books (e.g., fingerprinting) became established practices, while others, such as forensic DNA analysis, only emerged in the late twentieth century. The acceptance of forensic science in modern criminal investigations has undoubtedly represented an important advancement, with the Innocence Project documenting more than 375 DNA exonerations of wrongfully convicted individuals in the United States as of January 2020. Yet the increasing authority accorded to forensic evidence has also introduced a different problem: the tendency among the general public, and even some participants in the criminal justice system, to overlook the epistemological limitations of forensic science and place undue confidence in the reliability of its findings. This was a concern Caleb raised in his WAMC Radio interview:

When DNA came along, people said, โ€œWell, we donโ€™t really need to know the psychological stuff anymore. We just need to know somebodyโ€™s DNA fingerprint, and thatโ€™s going to tell us everything we need to know.โ€ The problem is, DNA, like everything else in forensic science, depends completely on who gathers it and analyzes it. There are a lot of good people who do it. There are an awful lot of people who are not good at it, which has led to a great many scandals [โ€ฆ]

But this was not the only reason Caleb focused so intently on the illusion of forensic certainty in Surrender. Potentially more problematic than the publicโ€™s general misunderstanding of the role that human error and cognitive biases can play in evidence collection, analytical decisions, and the interpretation of forensic evidence is the potential for conflicts of interest. Specifically, the close institutional relationships between forensic laboratories and the agencies responsible for securing convictions can create professional pressures that compromise the independence of scientific investigations, as Caleb explained to James Altucher:

Theyโ€™re in the same system, so if they want to advance, theyโ€™ve got to please their superiors, and their superiors are the cops, the district attorneys [โ€ฆ] and thereโ€™s only one thing those people are interested in, because they all want to advance, too: convictions, convictions, convictions.

One of Calebโ€™s core arguments in Surrender is therefore an appeal for a return to independence to safeguard the integrity of criminal investigations: โ€œWhat Iโ€™d like to see is that it gets set back up as its own arm, not part of the FBI, not part of local law enforcement, not part of state law enforcementโ€”its own agency.โ€


Now that we have explored the geography of Surrender and dug deeper into its themes, next month we will conclude our celebration by turning our attention to the lighter aspects of the novel, exploring some of the literary, cinematic, and musical influences woven throughout its pages. There are plenty of hidden treasures to discover, so I hope you’ll join me then for one final visit to Surrender.

Surrender, New York: A Decade Later โ€“ Part One

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Surrender, New York

We have marked some major anniversaries in Caleb Carrโ€™s career over the past few years, and 2026 brings us to another. Ten years ago, Caleb published Surrender, New York, his firstโ€”and onlyโ€”foray into contemporary crime fiction. This novel, which would prove to be his last work of fiction, sparked considerable debate when it first hit the shelves. Although bestselling crime novelist Michael Connelly gave the work a glowing front-page review in The New York Times Book Review, critics and general readers were more divided. Some loved the intricate detail and deeply personal nature of the novel, while others took issue with some of its more unconventional qualities.

As we have never done a deep dive into Surrender, New York here at 17th Street, I thought that todayโ€”on what would have been Calebโ€™s 71st birthdayโ€”might be a fitting time to begin. Due to the workโ€™s complexity, there are many potential routes we could take, but it seemed wise to start at the beginning with the most basic of questions: Why did Caleb decide to create a fictitious town (and county) in upstate New York as the setting for the novel, and where, precisely, is the quiet town of Surrender supposed to be located?

And so, let us start yet another anniversary journey by grabbing a sturdy pair of hiking boots, picking up our copies of the novel, and venturing into the wilds of the northern Taconic Mountains as we trace Calebโ€™s footsteps on our way to find Surrender.

Surveying the Landscape

It should come as no surprise to any of Caleb’s readers that place is often as much a character in his fiction as is the human cast that populate his pages. As early as his first novel, Casing the Promised Land, we can see the influence that setting has always had on its author. Towards the end of Casing, the novel’s protagonist, Jason, reflects on what his hometown of New York signifies to him. Importantly, it offers us a glimpse of what the city might mean to the author, too:

Whatever else New York may be, she’s a kind of mother and she does love her children. She loves them when they wander, because she knows they’ve got to come back and she knows why they do. A cab driver once told me that the only thing better than leaving New York is coming back to itโ€”when you’ve grown up on the city’s streets you know that cabbie’s words are true, and you love it to be that way. On every return the skyline of Manhattan grows; it grows, keeps growing until suddenly you’re within it, and every dream that the city has ever ignited is rekindled.

Casing the Promised Land

Although Caleb would not return to fiction for another fourteen years, it was once again the City of New York that featured as one of his central characters when he did. His breakthrough 1994 novel, The Alienist, took readers deep into Old New York. Indeed, it was part of the work’s general appeal that readers felt transported back to the city streets of 1896, with all their smells, sights, and sounds as vividly portrayed as though they were happening in the moment. Its sequel, The Angel of Darkness, also returned readers to that same New York; however, this work went further by expanding the horizon north to Caleb’s other heartland, upstate New Yorkโ€”a landscape he would not revisit in fiction for nearly another twenty years, until Surrender, New York.

Taconic Mountains viewed from Route 22

Caleb’s decision to feature upstate New York in both The Angel of Darkness and Surrender, New York is no mystery. His love of the area can be traced to fond childhood summers spent at his grandparents’ property in Cherry Plain, a hamlet located at the base of the Taconic Mountains in Rensselaer County. He continued to visit throughout his life, but it was the success of The Alienist that allowed him to purchase the neighboring estate, known as Misery Mountain Farm, in the late ’90s and move to the region permanently.

The question, then, is not so much why he chose to set two novels in upstate New York, but why he changed course in adhering to geographic realism between the two works. The Angel of Darkness features only real locations. Our first glimpse beyond the city in the novel is when the team board the Mary Powell, a real Hudson River steamer from the time, to view the majestic beauty of the Catskills from its deck. From there, they travel by rail to the small town of Ballston Spa in Saratoga County, which serves as their base for a large section of the novel. Notably, all of the villages and towns the characters visit are identifiable and described in historically accurate detail. So when Caleb decided to return upstate two decades later, it seems reasonable to ask what prompted him to lay aside the real map and draw one of his own, especially as Surrender was intended to sit in the same ‘universe’ as the Alienist novels.

Finding Surrender

The protagonist of Surrender, New York is Dr. Trajan Jones, a criminal psychologist and expert on Dr. Laszlo Kreizler’s theory of context from the Alienist books. References to Kreizler pepper the novel, placing us firmly in the intellectual territory of Caleb’s earlier work. Yet, from page one, it is made clear that we must learn a new geography. The action takes place in fictitious Burgoyne County, in which the equally fictitious town of Surrender is located. Several other invented towns are also named in the work, including Burgoyne’s county seat of Fraser. However, the landscape is not entirely fictional. Real highways, towns, cities, and natural features are also present in the work, making it clear that Burgoyne County is meant to exist alongside the real geography of the area rather than in place of it.

Fortunately, the retention of real landmarks also serves as a helpful clue, allowing readers to reconstruct the approximate locations of many of the fictitious towns in Burgoyne. In terms of the real geography of New York State, we learn early on that the town of Surrender is meant to be located in one of “a half-dozen valleys that lead down from the high ground of the northern Taconic Mountains” (p. 3), but it is the town’s description and history, recounted in Section Five of Chapter One, that provides us with the full context needed to localize it. Caleb writes:

The name “Surrender, New York” has long been a source of amusement for passing voyagers making their way north from “the city,” or east from the state thruway to Vermont and other points in northeastern New England. The one-word directional sign on Route 7 that points the way to the town is in fact no more than that: an old rectangular piece of standard highway green sheet metal making the turn onto a lonely byway and toward the northern Taconics beyond.

Surrender, New York

He goes on to explain that the town is “nothing more than a small, tumbledown hamlet at the crossroads of County Road 34 and another, unnumbered byway: a village with little to recommend it other than a seemingly common Civil War monument in the small square at its center” (p. 50). It should be noted that there is no real County Road 34 anywhere in the vicinity of Route 7, so this road, unfortunately, does not help to provide the marker we need to identify Surrender’s ‘true’ placement. However, the paragraphs that follow do give us helpful hints. In the novel, Surrender claims to be the site where the bulk of the British troops defeated at the Battle of Bennington surrendered on August 16, 1777. Although nearby Bennington, Vermont, gave the battle its name, it is across the border in New York where the battlefield site was actually located, a little way north of the real town of Hoosick Falls.

Perspective map of Hoosick Falls from 1889 by L.R. Burleigh with a list of landmarks

In combination with the highways and the Taconics themselves, Hoosick Falls acts as the most important geographic marker in Surrender, New York. Even though the picturesque town is a real historic community located in northeastern Rensselaer County, in the novel it appears to have been incorporated into Burgoyne. Specifically, as described in Part One: Chapter Three (Section One), to travel between the town of Surrender and Burgoyne’s county seat of Fraser, the characters must travel “in a zigzag pattern along several of the area’s major highways” (p. 124), first navigating a stretch of Route 7, then turning north onto Route 22 which takes them through Hoosick Falls, and finally staying on the highway until they reach Fraser. Given that Surrender lies south of Hoosick Falls in a valley of the Taconics, and Fraser serves as the county seat, the route would make little geographic sense unless Hoosick Falls also falls within the county. Thus, on the basis of these clues, an approximate map of locations is shown below.

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Although the approximate location of Surrender can be established with reasonable confidence, Fraser proves more elusive. The novel identifies Burgoyne’s county seat as a satellite of Albany through which Route 4 (along the Hudson River) passes, suggesting a settlement within the same corridor as the real city of Troy. However, Troy itself is also featured in the novel, making it clear that the two cannot be one and the same. Furthermore, the route described between Surrender and Fraserโ€”traveling along Route 7, then north on Route 22โ€”would be confusing, to say the least, if Fraser occupied Troy’s location, as the journey could instead be made directly west along Route 7. For these reasons, the map places Fraser only approximately, further north along the Route 4 corridor in the vicinity of the real city of Mechanicville.

It should be noted also that a handful of fictional towns have been left off this map. Despite North, South, and West Briarwood being featured in the novel, there are simply not enough geographic clues to identify their precise locations. I leave it up to readers to provide their best interpretations as to placement.

A Literary Tradition

Of course, simply being able to recreate Caleb’s intended map does not explain why he felt the need to invent Burgoyne County in the first place. After all, if towns like Hoosick Falls and Troy were included in the novel, why not use real locations throughout? To answer this question, perhaps one needs to look further afield to other authors who made similar decisions. Although many authors have invented a town to house their fiction (e.g., Agatha Christie’s St. Mary Mead), fewer have invented entire counties. Of those that have, their reasons have varied, but the similarities are informative.

Anthony Trollope’s fictional county of Barsetshire formed the basis of his Chronicles of Barsetshire series, published between 1855 and 1867. Inspired by real British counties, the fictional county and its cathedral town of Barchester were crucial in allowing Trollope to develop a consistent social, political, and ecclesiastical world over the six novels of his series without being constrained by the exact geography or institutions of any one real county. Similarly, Thomas Hardy revived the ancient name of “Wessex” for a largely fictional version of south-west England that formed the setting of his major novels. As with Trollope, many of the Wessex towns and landscapes were based closely on real places in Dorset and neighboring counties, but fictionalizing the region gave him the freedom to reshape geography and chronology in service of the stories.

Locations in Wessex, from The Wessex of Thomas Hardy by Bertram Windle, 1902, based on correspondence with Hardy

Crossing the Atlantic, perhaps the best-known fictional county in American literature is William Faulkner’s Yoknapatawpha, modeled on Lafayette County, Mississippi. Faulkner developed the county to such a degree that he created his own maps and it became the setting for many of his novels and stories. Given Faulkner’s desire to explore the legacy of the Civil War in the South, his use of a fictional county allowed him to examine heavy social and political themes such as racial segregation more effectively than if he had set his work in real communities instead.

Burgoyne County therefore belongs comfortably within this tradition. Like Hardy’s Wessex and Faulkner’s Yoknapatawpha, Burgoyne is less an invention than a reimagining of Caleb’s own Rensselaer County: a fictional landscape laid carefully alongside a real one. His motives may have been similar, too. In an interview with Literary Hub in 2016, he explained his reasons for exploring sensitive themes such as poverty and corruption in the novel:

“In my earliest memory, the vibrant communities were already on the downslope when I came along,” he said of the dead industry and boarded business districts in the nearby little towns. “Many of them are just ghost towns now.”

In The Alienist, the corruption reached into the police department and city government. Carr sees the same corruption in the small towns of upstate New York, going all the way to the governorโ€™s office in Albany. There are brutal cops who beat confessions out of subjects and corrupt district attorneys. “Iโ€™ve integrated myself into the area,” said Carr. “The deeper you get, the worse the corruption. There is this naked ambition and desire to get to another place.”

In 2005, Carr ran for local office as a favor to a friend. He had no desire to win and didnโ€™t. “I learned how bad things are from the ground up,” said Carr. “I saw people I knew to be criminals being elected. Itโ€™s ground-up corruption. That is why Albany is the most corrupt capitol in the country.”

Literary hub

Yet thematic content may only have been part of the equation. Caleb appears to have recognized that the protective distance between a novel’s setting and the real region it is based on can also function to shield the individuals who live in and around the communities an author is inspired by, something he addressed directly in the novel’s Acknowledgments section: “A word about contemporary fiction: when one shrouds one’s work in history, the unfortunate tendency of readers to try to identify just who in a writer’s life inspired which character is suspendedโ€”return to our own time, and that tendency is immediately resumed.”

Thus, understanding why Caleb broke with his usual geographic accuracy to create Surrender and the broader county of Burgoyne requires more than tracing roads and county lines on a map. Looking at the themes Caleb chose to explore, along with recognizing his respect for, and attachment to, the inhabitants of the corner of New York State he called home for more than two decades, is the only way one can truly grasp why he made such a deviation for his seventh and final novel.


I hope youโ€™ll join me over the coming months for Part Two as we explore Surrender, New York’s themes in greater depth, before concluding in Part Three with a treasure hunt for some of the literary, cinematic, and musical influences that are interwoven throughout the textโ€”and there are lots! Until then, happy reading.

The Italian Secretary, 20 Years On โ€“ Part Three

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On this final day of the year, it seems fitting to conclude our celebration of The Italian Secretary by harkening back to the origins of 17th Street itself. When this website was opened on December 31 of 2005, I could scarcely imagine the impact it would have on me personally and, more broadly, on Caleb Carrโ€™s loyal readership over the years that were to follow. What started as a way to pay homage to an author and a book series that had touched the lives of so many โ€” the Alienist novels โ€” quickly turned into something far richer and more enduring than I ever anticipated: a space for readers to come together to reflect, imagine, and discover hidden layers in Calebโ€™s works that will keep them alive long into the future.

Portrait of Dr. Kreizler as provided by a visitor to the website, Tiffany.

In this spirit, I thought it would be enjoyable to close this anniversary series by bringing Calebโ€™s own brilliant creation, the enigmatic Dr. Laszlo Kreizler, together with Holmes to address the question posed in The Italian Secretaryโ€™s afterword: What would have happened had Caleb let the worlds of Holmes and Kreizler collide? As Charles Finch noted in his USA Today review of Surrender, New York: โ€œโ€ฆevery word of fiction Carr has produced seems to have been written in either direct or indirect conversation with Sir Arthur Conan Doyle.โ€ This is no accident, particularly as it pertains to the Alienist novels. In the essay Caleb contributed to Ghosts in Baker Street in 2006 (in lieu of the story that turned into The Italian Secretary), he explained his motivation in some depth:

โ€œIn attempting to bring to life a late nineteenth-century psychologist who becomes his own form of โ€˜amateur detective,โ€™ I intended to pay homage to, and recognize the works of, all the forensic and consulting psychologists that Conan Doyle so carefully failed to mention in his own works. But at the same time, I had no desire to reinvent Sherlock Holmes, even in a veiled form, nor would mine be an attempt to demonstrate any shortcomings of the great detectiveโ€™s character, or that of his creatorโ€™s. Rather (at least ideally), the two fictional creations and intellectual approaches would be complementary, not contradictory, for one can pay homage far more effectively by filling some of the available creative space around a beloved character than by trying to crowd the same territory through imitation or reinvention.โ€

The Sherlock Holmes Companion: An Elementary Guide

Caleb further elaborated on his decision to focus on the work of early psychologists in the interview he gave to The Sherlock Holmes Companion in 2009. Clarifying that โ€œthe idea of the Alienist was really to create a character to solve all the cases Sherlock Holmes could not solve,โ€ he pointed out that there was โ€œa whole category of crimes โ€” stranger-based crimes โ€” that have no evidence trail. If you ignore motivation and profiling, they will remain unsolved forever.โ€ Conan Doyle avoided addressing this class of crime in the Holmes stories as he wanted to demonstrate the use of reason to solve crime purely on the basis of physical evidence; but it was these stranger-based crimes that became the foundation for the Alienist books.

By considering the respective motivations of the authors involved, we get our first clue of what might have happened had Caleb brought Holmes and Kreizler together on a case. With this in mind, let us now turn back to The Italian Secretary’s afterword to explore the ideas presented there about what such a meeting might have entailed and what its outcome might have been.

“Dr. Kreizler, Mr. Sherlock Holmes…”

โ€œDr. Watson, Mr. Sherlock Holmes,โ€ said Stamford, introducing us.

โ€œHow are you?โ€ he said cordially, gripping my hand with a strength for which I should hardly have given him credit. โ€œYou have been in Afghanistan, I perceive.โ€


โ€œHow on earth did you know that?โ€ I asked in astonishment.


โ€œNever mind,โ€ said he, chuckling to himself.

Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, A Study in Scarlet
Sherlock Holmes and John Watson

As Jon Lellenberg, the U.S. Representative to the Conan Doyle Estate, points out in the opening of The Italian Secretary’s afterword, perhaps the most famous and fated introduction in the whole of English literature occurs in A Study in Scarlet when Dr. John H. Watson meets the great consulting detective, Sherlock Holmes. Each in need of a fellow lodger to split the rent, they are introduced at the chemistry laboratory of St. Bartholomewโ€™s Hospital by Watsonโ€™s former surgeonโ€™s assistant, Stamford. It was a meeting that resulted in a crime-solving partnership that has never been equaled in modern detective fiction, spanning several decades, four novels, and fifty-six short stories. But what would have happened if the meeting had gone a different way?

The first alternative Lellenberg contemplates in his essay is a meeting between Dr. Watson and Dr. Kreizler; however, he ultimately concludes that the lack of tension between the two โ€” both medical men who, despite differing specialties, agreed that the mind is shaped by biological and environmental factors โ€” would not have resulted in a particularly effective partnership, at least as far as solving crime is concerned. Indeed, the pairing may more closely have resembled the extant relationship between Dr. Kreizler and Lucius Isaacson, who had medical training as rigorous as Watsonโ€™s, though with a far greater knowledge of forensics. While Kreizler and Lucius work well together, as a contained crime-solving duo, one could argue that they are not best placed to augment each otherโ€™s limitations, which is why a team of investigators is needed in the Alienist novels. One must turn away from Watson, then, if one is to bridge the worlds of Conan Doyle and Caleb Carr.

Portrait of Sherlock Holmes by Sidney Paget

The meeting Lellenberg prefers to imagine is one that would have resulted in far greater tension: that between Dr. Kreizler and Sherlock Holmes himself. From their very introduction, the pair would undoubtedly have sized each other up and come to mutually wary conclusions about the otherโ€™s method. While Kreizler, always open to eccentric characters (as Stevie noted in The Angel of Darkness), would have been intrigued by Holmesโ€™s powers of observation and deduction, Lellenberg correctly notes that he would also have grown โ€œimpatient with its limitations.โ€ Holmes, on the other hand, would likely have been suspicious of the doctorโ€™s emphasis on psychological context, for, as he once warned Watson in A Scandal in Bohemia, โ€œIt is a capital mistake to theorize before one has data. Insensibly one begins to twist facts to suit theories, instead of theories to suit facts.โ€ Yet, despite this, Lellenberg doesnโ€™t see this tension as problematic; rather, the two menโ€™s contrasting approaches may have been the very fuel that would have propelled an investigation forward:

โ€ฆthe desire to see the two approaches โ€” Holmesโ€™s and Kreizlerโ€™s โ€” collide with each other cannot be gainsaid. We must be dialecticians ourselves if we are to give both approaches their just due. Whether a collaboration would be set in London or New York at the end of the nineteenth century is immaterial โ€” both of those great metropolises offer fertile ground for a case that would challenge each of these men, and make for a partnership profoundly upsetting to both, but tremendously interesting to the reader. Sparks would fly, and it is easy to imagine Watson and Moore quietly retiring to one of their clubs every so often to get away from the scene and commiserate together. But the temptation is there. I hope Mr. Carr succumbs to it eventually.

The Italian Secretary, Afterword

Unfortunately, when Caleb was asked in an interview with The Age whether he was ever likely to succumb to the temptation, he was not enthusiastic. โ€œThatโ€™s not my fictional style,โ€ he explained. โ€œIโ€™m known for incorporating real historical characters into my books. Itโ€™s far more likely that Conan Doyle, rather than Holmes, would appear in a Kreizler tale.โ€ Although this may have disappointed readers keen to see the first consulting detective collaborate with the first forensic psychologist, Calebโ€™s instinct was a perceptive one, particularly given his motivation regarding the Alienist novels themselves. After all, Kreizler was not interested in brilliant minds for their own sake; he was interested in the psychological contexts that shaped them. In this light, Conan Doyle himself โ€” rather than his creation โ€” may have been the most compelling subject for a Kreizler inquiry.

“Dr. Kreizler, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle…”

โ€œDo not,โ€ Kreizler answered slowly, trying very hard to be clear, โ€œlook for causes in this city. Nor in recent circumstances, nor in recent events. The creature you seek was created long ago. Perhaps in his infancy โ€” certainly in childhood. And not necessarily here.โ€

The Alienist, Chapter 6
Self Portrait (1888) by Charles Altamont Doyle

The year 1893 was a momentous one for Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. On October 10, the newly famous authorโ€™s father, Charles Altamont Doyle, died suddenly at the age of 61 from what was described as โ€œa fit during the nightโ€ while confined at the Crichton Royal Institution in Dumfries, Scotland. An illustrator and watercolorist who had once exhibited at the Royal Scottish Academy, Charles Doyle had spent much of the previous decade at Sunnyside, the Montrose Royal Lunatic Asylum, after struggling with depression and alcoholism. In later years, his dependence on alcohol was compounded by epileptic seizures and episodes of memory loss.

This alone would have been a tragic set of circumstances. However, just two months after Charles Doyleโ€™s death, in December of the same year, his son added to them by making the unthinkable decision to kill off his most famous creation โ€” a character who also was no stranger to addiction, as we see in the opening paragraphs of The Sign of Four, published in 1890:

Sherlock Holmes took his bottle from the corner of the mantel-piece and his hypodermic syringe from its neat morocco case. With his long, white, nervous fingers he adjusted the delicate needle, and rolled back his left shirt-cuff. For some little time his eyes rested thoughtfully upon the sinewy forearm and wrist all dotted and scarred with innumerable puncture-marks. Finally he thrust the sharp point home, pressed down the tiny piston, and sank back into the velvet-lined arm-chair with a long sigh of satisfaction.

Three times a day for many months I had witnessed this performance, but custom had not reconciled my mind to it. On the contrary, from day to day I had become more irritable at the sight, and my conscience swelled nightly within me at the thought that I had lacked the courage to protest. Again and again I had registered a vow that I should deliver my soul upon the subject, but there was that in the cool, nonchalant air of my companion which made him the last man with whom one would care to take anything approaching to a liberty. His great powers, his masterly manner, and the experience which I had had of his many extraordinary qualities, all made me diffident and backward in crossing him.

Yet upon that afternoon, whether it was the Beaune which I had taken with my lunch, or the additional exasperation produced by the extreme deliberation of his manner, I suddenly felt that I could hold out no longer.

โ€œWhich is it to-day?โ€ I asked,โ€”โ€œmorphine or cocaine?โ€

He raised his eyes languidly from the old black-letter volume which he had opened. โ€œIt is cocaine,โ€ he said,โ€”โ€œa seven-per-cent. solution. Would you care to try it?โ€

The Sign of Four, Chapter 1

Although Conan Doyle would eventually resurrect his great detective, the events of 1893 invite a more searching question, one that Dr. Kreizler, with his insistence that โ€œthe answers one gives to lifeโ€™s crucial questions are never truly spontaneous,โ€ would surely have asked. Of course, Conan Doyle always insisted that the hyperrational Holmes โ€” far removed in temperament from his troubled, artistic father โ€” was largely inspired by another important figure in his life, Dr. Joseph Bell, for whom he had clerked at the Royal Infirmary of Edinburgh; but it is noteworthy that Bell himself rejected the idea, writing to his former clerk, โ€œYou are yourself Sherlock Holmes and well you know it.โ€

Arthur Conan Doyleby Henry L. Gatesoil on canvas, 1927NPG 4115ยฉ National Portrait Gallery, London

It is curious to consider what Dr. Kreizler would have made of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. As we saw in Part One, Caleb was deeply sympathetic to the creator of Holmes, particularly in relation to the authorโ€™s struggles with grief. And perhaps it is this that would have offered the most likely opportunity to bring the author into Kreizlerโ€™s orbit, had Caleb decided to go down such a path. There were, after all, only limited opportunities for the two to have credibly crossed paths, as Conan Doyle visited New York a mere handful of times: once in 1894 โ€” which would have required a prequel to the Alienist novels โ€” or later, between 1922 and 1923, when he was on his speaking tour devoted to spiritualism.

I favor the latter as the more compelling opportunity for Caleb to have brought the two together. By the early 1920s, an aging Kreizler would have been facing his own reckoning with grief as Stevieโ€™s health declined, forcing him to confront the limits of intellect and reason in the face of loss. Conan Doyle, too, arrived in New York in 1922 carrying the heavy weight of bereavement. Although he had turned to spiritualism prior to the Great War, the deaths of his son Kingsley, his brother Innes, and other close family members during this time only strengthened his commitment to his metaphysical beliefs.

Fifth Avenue in 1925

While it is, of course, Caleb alone who could have best brought these characters together, one can nonetheless imagine a scenario in which the world-famous author might have found his way to the door of 283 East Seventeenth Street with an unsettling case only Dr. Kreizler and his team could hope to address. For my own part, I think it would have been fascinating to see how these characters โ€” now aging, reflective, and increasingly aware of mortality โ€” might have applied their respective approaches in the altered intellectual and social landscape of New York in the 1920s. Such a meeting, had it occurred, could have proved revealing on all sides.

Alas, we must leave such imaginings where they belong: in the realm of speculation. For whatever reason, the meeting between Kreizler and Conan Doyle was never written, but the fact that it feels so tantalizingly possible speaks to the care with which Caleb shaped his fictional worlds, all of which were deeply rooted in history, psychology, and moral inquiry. As we end The Italian Secretaryโ€™s anniversary series, and 17th Street enters its third decade, it feels appropriate to simply be thankful that we have been left with such a treasure-trove of richly imagined works that they still invite analysis and reflection this many years on.

The Italian Secretary, 20 Years On – Part Two

View Part One, Part Two, and Part Three of The Italian Secretary 20th anniversary series.

With the festive season now upon us, I invite you to pause for a moment as we continue our tribute to The Italian Secretary โ€” Caleb Carrโ€™s contribution to the Holmes legacy โ€” for its 20th anniversary this year. Last month, we began this series by exploring how Conan Doyleโ€™s interest in Spiritualism, and its subtle influence on the original Holmes canon, helped to inspire the supernatural thread that runs through the novel. Yet, as we learned in Part One, there was far more to Calebโ€™s choice of subject matter than this alone.

In the novelโ€™s afterword, the U.S. Representative to the Conan Doyle Estate, Jon Lellenberg, explained that The Italian Secretary had originally been commissioned to form part of a short story collection he co-edited, Ghosts in Baker Street. Caleb, a lifelong Sherlockian, had been invited to contribute; however, the deeper he delved into the real historical crime heโ€™d selected as inspiration, the richer (and longer!) his contribution became โ€” so much so that the decision was made to publish it as its own novel.

In todayโ€™s post, we therefore move away from the supernatural (if only briefly) to learn what it was about the 16th-century murder of David Rizzio, the titular โ€œItalian secretaryโ€, that captured Calebโ€™s imagination. It is a story that draws us back to the Edinburgh of Mary, Queen of Scots, and a tower where a ghastly deed took placeโ€ฆ

Northward to the Scottish Border

โ€œFurious stabbingsโ€ฆ bombsโ€ฆ Holmes, what in Heavenโ€™s name are we entering into?โ€

Holmes glanced up and out of the window. โ€œScotland, I should sayโ€ฆโ€

The Italian Secretary, Chapter 4

To understand why Caleb chose to center his Holmes tale in Scotland, we need look no further than the novelโ€™s dedication. Beyond his beloved feline companion at the time, Caleb credited Hilary Hale, his editor in London, as the person responsible for his visit to the location that ultimately became the setting for The Italian Secretary: the Royal Palace of Holyroodhouse. He explains how this happened in the Acknowledgments section:

โ€œI could not have known, when she dispatched me to Scotland once on a book tour, that a chance visit to the royal palace of Holyrood would one day become this story; but I do know that without the hard work, infinite patience, and support of Hilary (and of her brilliant co-workers at Little, Brown UK), that trip would probably never have taken place.โ€

The tour Caleb is referring to took place several years earlier, at a pivotal moment in his career. According to The Bookseller, the unexpected success of The Alienist meant that his UK publisher had decided to give its sequel, The Angel of Darkness, considerable backing when it was released in early 1998. In addition to a first print run of 25,000 copies, it also received an international book tour. Starting in Ireland before crossing to London, Caleb gave talks at the Waterstones branches in Dublin, Manchester, Leamington Spa, and Edinburgh. It was the Edinburgh leg of the tour, which took place on March 13, 1998, that would prove fateful, as it marked Calebโ€™s first visit to the Palace of Holyroodhouse.

The Secrets of Holyroodhouse

โ€œI went also to see Mary Queen of Scotsโ€™ Bedchamber (a very small one it is) from whence David Rizzio was dragโ€™d out and stabโ€™d in the ante room where there is some of his Blood which they canโ€™t get washโ€™d out.โ€

Elizabeth, Baroness Percy (1760)

The Palace of Holyroodhouse (also known as Holyrood Palace) dates to the early 16th century when it was constructed by James IV. Located beside the Augustinian Holyrood Abbey that was erected several centuries earlier in 1128, it is said to be named either for a vision of the cross King David I had while hunting in the area, or for a relic of the True Cross (known as the Holy Rood) that belonged to his mother, Saint Margaret. Unlike the vast ceremonial palaces more commonly associated with the British monarchy, Holyroodhouse has always been an intimate and lived-in seat of power, with its private apartments closely interwoven with its public spaces. While the public may be more familiar with Balmoral โ€” the current royal familyโ€™s favored private Scottish estate โ€” Holyroodhouse has long been the official royal residence in Scotland, a tradition that continues to the present day.

Seventeenth-century portrait traditionally said to be of Rizzio.

Although Caleb never publicly discussed his tour of Holyroodhouse, it seems likely he would have had an experience just as affecting as other visitors have reported for over two hundred years. According to the Royal Collection Trust, public fascination with the doomed reign of one of the palaceโ€™s most intriguing monarchs โ€” and a central figure of The Italian Secretary โ€” Mary, Queen of Scots, has attracted visitors since the latter half of the 18th century. From these earliest years, visitors to Maryโ€™s former private apartments have been confronted with the gruesome sight of bloodied floorboards, the last remaining evidence of the murder of David Rizzio, her private secretary. As this murder forms the basis for The Italian Secretary, it seems plausible that this remnant from the palaceโ€™s violent past may have served as Calebโ€™s first direct inspiration for the story during his visit.

Given that Caleb included a vivid description of how the 1566 murder of Rizzio took place in the novel, I will avoid going into detail here in order not to ruin the book for readers who may not have familiarized themselves with the tale. However, for the sake of providing historical context and wonderful visuals of the palace itself, I strongly recommend watching the following video from the Royal Collection Trust, which opens with a brief summary of the famous assassination:

What gave the murder of David Rizzio its unusual longevity was not only its brutal nature and political significance, but the way it continued to haunt Holyroodhouse itself โ€” quite literally. Indeed, this may be another reason Caleb decided to feature the story. Over the centuries, rumors have persisted of disturbances and apparitions at the palace tied to the murder. In addition to the bloodstained floorboards where Rizzioโ€™s body had lain after his death (the boards have been replaced several times, with the stains said to reappear in the same location each time), a ghostly figure attributed to the secretary has been observed in the area. But Rizzio is not the only spirit tied to the killing who has been said to linger within the palace walls.

Lord Darnley in his late teens, by an unknown artist.

Not long after the secretaryโ€™s death, Lord Darnley โ€” Maryโ€™s husband and one of the instigators of Rizzioโ€™s assassination โ€” also met a violent end. Although initially believed to have died in a house explosion while recovering from illness, his body showed signs of strangulation. Suspicion for the murder fell on Mary and her future husband, the Earl of Bothwell, though it was ultimately several of the Earlโ€™s servants and acquaintances who were found guilty and executed. Of relevance here, as with the secretary he helped to dispatch, Lord Darnleyโ€™s spirit is also said to haunt his former rooms at Holyroodhouse.

Whether one lends credence to such stories or not, they form part of the accumulated atmosphere of Holyroodhouse, a place where history, intrigue, and the unexplained overlap. For a writer like Caleb, it is easy to see how this charged setting might have suggested itself when he was invited to write a Holmes story with an other-worldly element. In this light, his decision to center The Italian Secretary on the murder of David Rizzio seems less an imaginative leap than a natural convergence: his interest in Conan Doyleโ€™s metaphysical curiosity (see Part One), his book tour to Edinburgh, and his lifelong fascination with history all pointing in a single direction.


I hope you have enjoyed exploring some of the inspirations for The Italian Secretary. To conclude the year and our celebration of the novelโ€™s anniversary, in Part Three we will give our imaginations room to roam as we consider what might have happened had Caleb followed Jon Lellenbergโ€™s suggestion in the novelโ€™s afterword and brought the worlds of Holmes and Kreizler together. I trust you will join me then, but in the meantime, happy reading!