A Peek Behind the Scenes of The Alienist

In honor of the 30th anniversary of The Alienist last year, we spent several months tracing the novel’s publication history, along with that of its sequel, The Angel of Darkness. Today, on what would have been Caleb Carr’s 70th birthday, I feel fortunate to be able to share a previously unseen slice of his writing process, generously provided by a member of his family. Ever the meticulous researcher, Caleb revealed in interviews from the ‘90s that in the lead-up to his writing of The Alienist, his research and plot outline was so extensive that it covered the walls of his one-bedroom apartment. In a 1997 interview with Publishers Weekly, it was noted that:

…he devoted “seven to eight months” to “pure research” and plotting. Carr points to a wall of the room. “From the corner of this room all the way across the wall, The Alienist was plotted out on tiny strips of paper.” After an equal amount of time spent writing, he turned in the manuscript.

Research board created by Caleb Carr as part of his planning process for The Alienist in 1994

Although the tiny strips of paper have not been found (if they still exist), we can now glimpse a tangible remnant from that time. A large board was recently unearthed containing a poster of the brain, along with several maps directly tied to The Alienist. In today’s post, we will take a closer look at two of these maps—and in doing so, learn more about the real history that shaped Caleb’s vision for The Alienist.

Wards and Police Precincts

Even though a street map of contemporary Manhattan occupies the largest section of the board, it is the hand-drawn map pinned beside it that offers the greatest insight into Caleb’s research process for the book. Focused on Midtown and Lower Manhattan, the dark pencil lines on this map mark the boundaries of Manhattan’s police precincts from the 1890s. Each precinct is labelled according to its number (e.g., ‘1st Pct.’), and in the middle of each is a star with street intersections corresponding to the precinct’s station house. For example, Caleb has noted that the First Precinct’s station house was located at 52-54 New Street, which is consistent with the station house’s address noted in The Manual of the Corporation of the City of New York.

Readers of The Alienist will remember that police precincts play an important role in the novel. As early as Chapter 2 when John visits the first crime scene, the fact that police from two different precincts were in attendance provided the first clue that the murders under investigation were of a concerning variety:

Near the entrance to the watchtowers atop the anchor, standing under the flimsy light of a few electric bulbs and bearing portable lanterns, were several patrolmen whose small brass insignia marked them as coming from the Thirteenth Precinct (we had passed the station house moments before on Delancey Street). With them was a sergeant from the Fifteenth, a fact that immediately struck me as odd—in two years of covering the criminal beat for the Times, not to mention a childhood in New York, I’d learned that each of the city’s police precincts guarded its terrain jealously. (Indeed, at mid-century the various police factions had openly warred with each other.) For the Thirteenth to have summoned a man from the Fifteenth indicated that something significant was going on.

But the precincts aren’t the only focus of the map. A close inspection shows lightly dashed pencil markings atop the precinct boundaries. These markings, which don’t directly match the precincts, correspond to New York’s administrative ‘wards’. From 1686 until the mid-19th century, these subdivisions were the smallest political unit in the city and played a crucial role in local elections. Ward ‘bosses’ (often saloonkeepers) wielded considerable influence, and by the 1850s, the ward system was viewed by reformers as the city’s principal source of corruption.

Even so, this wasn’t the reason Caleb was interested in ward boundaries. By the 1890s, New York’s wards had been replaced with districts for political purposes. Indeed, at this time in the city’s history, the ward system only served two vestigial functions: the administration of public schools (this was centralized in 1896) and the conduct of state and federal censuses. It is the latter of these that caused wards to play a role in The Alienist, and an important one at that.

In Chapter 39, John Moore and Sara Howard pay a visit to Mr. Murray of the Census Bureau to determine whether Beecham, the murderer, may have worked as an enumerator during the 1890 census. While there, the following exchange takes place:

I tried another tack: “I trust he didn’t do anything untoward while he was working in the Thirteenth Ward?”

Murray grunted once. “If he had, I hardly would have promoted him from enumerator to office clerk and kept him on for another five years—” Murray caught himself and jerked his head up. “Just a minute. How did you know he was assigned to the Thirteenth Ward?”

I smiled. “It’s of no consequence. Thank you, Mr. Murray, and good evening.”

Further on in the chapter, John explains:

Enumerators had received their assignments according to congressional districts, which in New York had been subdivided according to wards. My question to Murray about Beecham in the Thirteenth Ward had, I told Sara, been a guess: I knew that Benjamin and Sofia Zweig had lived in that ward, and I was going on the theory that Beecham had met them while working in the area, perhaps even while interviewing their family for the census.

We can see clearly that it was John’s knowledge of the city’s wards and the role they played in the census that led to a breakthrough in the case. One hand-drawn map can therefore tell us much about the novel and Caleb’s process in writing it.

Map of the Harvard campus with annotations by Caleb Carr

Harvard Campus Map

In addition to the precinct map, the other item of interest on the board is a hand labelled map of the Harvard campus. Like the street map next to it, the document is contemporary, but the locations Caleb marked with sticky notes provide a fascinating insight into his outlining and planning process. Of note, most of the locations are not featured in the single flashback scene in The Alienist set at Harvard, so readers may wonder at their significance. To address this, we must first turn back to Chapter 5 in the novel where we learn about the fateful clash that first brought Theodore Roosevelt, Laszlo Kreizler, and John Moore together while they were studying at Harvard in the fall of 1877.

In this scene, we learn that Moore and Roosevelt had, for differing reasons, decided to take a course in comparative anatomy taught by William James, the man who would come to be viewed as the father of modern American psychology but who, at that time, was teaching philosophy and anatomy to undergraduates. At the same time, Kreizler had also been drawn to study with James, but for a different reason. The young Dr. Kreizler had recently completed his medical degree at Columbia’s College of Physicians and Surgeons and was undertaking a new graduate course in psychology offered by James.

Although the youthful Kreizler admired his professor, the two had a fundamental disagreement over a long-standing philosophical debate that still sits at the heart of psychology today, as John explains:

James had been a maudlin, unhealthy boy, and as a young man had more than once contemplated suicide; but he overcame this tendency as a result of reading the works of the French philosopher Renouvier, who taught that a man could, by force of will, overcome all psychic (and many physical) ailments. “My first act of free will shall be to believe in free will!” had been James’s early battle cry, an attitude that continued to dominate his thinking in 1877. Such a philosophy was bound to collide with Kreizler’s developing belief in what he called “context”: the theory that every man’s actions are to a very decisive extent influenced by his early experiences, and that no man’s behavior can be analyzed or affected without knowledge of those experiences.

What started as a battle between the two in the new psychology laboratory James had established in Lawrence Hall eventually led the pair to host a public debate at University Hall, with most of the student body in attendance. Somewhat predictably, the engaging professor won the debate, but this was not the end of Kreizler’s battles that night. Dining with Moore at a tavern across the Charles River, the young Roosevelt approached and engaged Kreizler in an argument that turned personal:

Kreizler laid down the challenge for an affair of honor, and Theodore delightedly took him up, suggesting a boxing match. I knew Laszlo would have preferred fencing foils—with his bad left arm he stood little chance in a ring—but he agreed, in keeping with the code duello, which gave Theodore, as the challenged party, the choice of weapons. To Roosevelt’s credit, when the two men had stripped to their waists in the Hemenway Gymnasium (entered, at that late hour, by way of a set of keys I had won from a custodian in a poker game earlier in the year) and saw Kreizler’s arm, he offered to let him choose some weapon other than fists; but Kreizler was stubborn and proud, and though he was, for the second time in the same evening, predestined for defeat, he put up a far better fight than anyone had expected. His gameness impressed all present and, predictably, won him Roosevelt’s heartfelt admiration.

This richly painted scene established the background needed to bring the three characters back together twenty years later. Yet, if we look closely, the locations featured only included Lawrence Hall, University Hall, the Hemenway Gymnasium, and the unnamed tavern across the Charles River. Of these, only Lawrence Hall is marked on Caleb’s map. What are the other locations, then?

The answer can be found in biographies of Theodore Roosevelt. In the youthful Roosevelt’s freshman year at college, he lived in Mrs. Richardson’s boarding house at 16 Winthrop Street, one of the locations marked on the map. Similarly, the Agassiz Museum, otherwise known as the Museum of Comparative Zoology, was one the young man’s haunts in his junior and senior years. The significance of Dane Hall is a little more difficult to establish, but perhaps the solution lies in the fact that it was only a short distance from the Hemenway Gymnasium where the fateful boxing match in the novel takes place.

Although we can never know for certain, it appears as though this map was annotated before the scene at Harvard was plotted. And it seems likely from the locations marked that Caleb worked backwards from Roosevelt’s time at the college to plan the scene. Perhaps his original ideas included 16 Winthrop Street or the Agassiz Museum, or perhaps he was merely working out relative distances.

In any case, like the precinct map, it provides an intriguing insight into his process. I hope readers found this sneak peek behind the scenes of The Alienist as interesting as I did researching it. Happy Birthday, Caleb. You are missed.

Celebrating 30 Years of The Alienist – Part One

View Part One, Part Two, Part Three, Part Four, and Part Five of The Alienist 30th anniversary series.

For those who are finding the website through this post, please note that Caleb Carr passed away in May, 2024. See Remembering Caleb Carr (1955-2024) for 17th Street’s memorial to a beloved author.

“You can practically hear the clip-clop of horses’ hooves echoing down old Broadway … You can taste the good food at Delmonico’s. You can smell the fear in the air.”

So began The New York Times’s review of The Alienist in 1994, and the words are no less true now than they were then. Published thirty years ago this month on March 15, 1994, Caleb Carr’s breakthrough thriller went on to garner significant public and critical acclaim, spending 24 weeks on the Times’s hardcover fiction bestseller list and earning its author an Anthony Award in 1995. It’s little wonder why. Through its seamless blend of meticulously researched historical detail, captivating team of investigators led by the enigmatic and brilliant Dr. Laszlo Kreizler, and thrilling chase for a killer, the novel captured the imaginations of so many readers that it has been studied in schools and is considered a modern classic of its genre.

For the 20th anniversary of the The Alienist’s publication in 2014, 17th Street featured an in-depth collection of posts exploring the novel’s themes and enduring appeal. This year, we will be commemorating Caleb and celebrating the work’s 30th anniversary by delving into the novel’s journey to publication with some wonderful insights into rare early editions, along with discussing the reception the novel received upon release and the legacy it has left on the genre today. Like the 20th anniversary series, this celebration will take place over a series of posts, and I hope it will provide something of interest to new and old fans alike.

To the beginning, then!

The journey to publication

In the afterword to the 2006 trade paperback edition of The Alienist, Caleb Carr wrote: “Like most wonderful and terrible things, The Alienist was never supposed to happen.”

Two years before the groundbreaking thriller was set to make its appearance and change the landscape of historical fiction, Caleb’s first major sole-authored work of military history, The Devil Soldier, had just been published by Random House, and its author was on the hunt for his next subject. But instead of a work of history, another idea had been brewing. “A lifelong interest in crime and the formation of the mind had led me to decide on a psychological thriller,” Caleb explained in the 2006 afterword, “but my grounding in nonfiction would not allow me to be anything but rigorous in my research and approach. This, I soon realized, could get tricky: How do you devise a story that includes the kind of hard science I’d nosed around in without making readers and audiences want to drive ice picks through their own eyes?”

The challenge went beyond the difficulties of incorporating complex philosophical ideas and early forensic science in a thriller, though. Given that Caleb was still in the process of building a profile as a serious historian, his agent, Suzanne Gluck at WME, and editor, Ann Godoff at Random House, were not of a mind to encourage Caleb’s move from nonfiction to fiction. Thus, once he settled on a subject — inspired, at least in part, by his experiences as a college student during the ‘Son of Sam’ killings in New York — Caleb needed a way to convince his publishing partners to support the switch. The solution, he decided, lay in selling the story as a work of nonfiction, not fiction. To pull off such a scheme required not only a believable premise, but also doctored paperwork, including a false visual: a photograph showing Dr. Laszlo Kreizler visiting Theodore Roosevelt in the White House, years after the events of The Alienist supposedly took place.

The process of creating the false image, and the a copy of the photograph itself, can be found in the 2006 afterword (which I highly recommend reading), but for our purposes here, what matters is the end result: it worked. Caleb’s agent, Suzanne Gluck, took the ruse well, and his editor, Ann Godoff — even then, a formidable force in publishing — was also won over. And so, after receiving an advance of $65,000 for the book, the process of writing began. In an interview with New York Magazine in 1994, it was explained:

For fourteen months, Carr lived The Alienist. He read dozens of books on serial killers and huddled with Dr. David Abrahamsen, a dean of forensic psychiatry. Friends would bump into Carr at odd hours, in odd parts of town, trying to track down addresses that had long disappeared. One ex-girlfriend recalls that during touch-football games, he’d talk brain dissection.

The specifics of the novel’s editorial process have not been discussed in interviews (at least to my knowledge), but the novel’s timeline from Spring, 1993 onward is known. At that time, Caleb turned in the 700-page manuscript, and soon afterward it began to circulate around Hollywood. By late June, the debut thriller had built such buzz that producer Scott Rudin had purchased the film rights for $500,000. This only caused interest in the still-unpublished novel to skyrocket.

By September of 1993, photocopied typescripts of the novel were ready to be distributed to sales representatives. A kind visitor to 17th Street, Steve Rogers, sent through photographs of an extremely rare copy of one of these typescripts that he was recently able to acquire. Bound in plain blue stock paper and tape with a note from Bridget Marmion, the Random House Director of Marketing, on the cover, this fascinating typescript includes an editorial fact sheet (revealing a first printing of 100,000 copies), a copy of The Hollywood Reporter‘s article on Scott Rudin’s purchase of the film rights, and the manuscript itself.

To a collector, this is like finding gold. Other than Caleb Carr’s original manuscript, editorial copies, and whatever copies were distributed to sell the movie rights, this is likely the earliest copy that exists. But Steve had several other rare editions that he was kind enough to share photographs of for the website.

In the lead up to the novel’s release, uncorrected proofs were distributed to reviewers, critics, and industry professionals for early evaluation and feedback to generate interest. The Alienist‘s uncorrected proof edition had a standard blue and white Random House paperback binding, with promotional material on the flyleaf.

Finally, advance reader copy (or ARC) editions were also distributed for The Alienist to build buzz and anticipation for its impending release, an example of which can be seen below. Although the binding is still plain (this time maroon), the same typeface and title design that would come to be used on the first hardback edition has now appeared, and you can see the novel transitioning to its final finished form. On the back cover, the novel’s finalised blurb appears.

The publication would soon follow in March of 1994, but the whirlwind wasn’t over yet!


The next installment of this 30th anniversary series contains the story of the novel’s release and photographs of first and special editions of the novel. You can continue reading here. And, of course, if any visitors have further details about the editions shown here they would like to share, please feel free to leave a comment or get in touch.

Anthony Comstock Character Profile

As regular 17th Street visitors would be aware, I am (very) slowly completing the supporting character profiles for historical figures that appear in The Alienist. As part of this, I recently completed the profile for the notorious United States Postal Censor, Anthony Comstock. You can now find his character profile below as well as on the supporting characters list.

Comstock, Mr. Anthony

Appears in The Alienist

The fanatical moral reformer Anthony Comstock (1844-1915) only appears in The Alienist on one occasion, but he plays an important role in the novel behind the scenes. Born in Connecticut and raised in a devout Congregationalist home, Comstock served two years in the Union Army before moving to New York City where he married and found work in a dry-goods establishment. Appalled by the city’s rampant vice, Comstock helped to form the New York Society for the Suppression of Vice in 1872. The following year, he came to prominence for convincing legislators that abortion and birth control was as much of a threat to public morality as the “obscene” material (i.e., pornography and indecent literature) targeted by existing legislation. He argued that the consumption of such material resulted from increasing promiscuity among younger generations that was concealed through contraceptive use and abortifacients. Until this point, there had been no federal restrictions on abortion or birth control.

As a result of Comstock’s lobbying, Congress passed An Act for the Suppression of Trade in, and Circulation of, Obscene Literature and Articles of Immoral Use, better known as the Comstock Law, in 1873. The act strengthened existing legislation as well as banning the importation, sale, or distribution of any materials relating to abortion or contraception. Penalties for breaking the law included fines of up to $5,000, or jail and hard labor for a maximum of 10 years. Following the passage of the act, Comstock was appointed as a “special agent” of the United States Postal Service, a role he maintained from 1873 to 1915. During his time as Postal Censor, Comstock’s zealous enforcement of the law resulted in more than 3,600 arrests, and drove at least sixteen people to suicide, including the well-known abortionist Ann Lohman.

Although originally concerned with birth control and abortion, Comstock’s moral crusade had expanded to such a point by the time The Alienist was set in 1896 that he was even attempting to suppress nudity in artwork and medical anatomy textbooks, resulting in indiscriminate raids on art galleries and art schools. By this time, he had also written several books to educate the public about moral dangers in the urban environment.

Click here to read more. Warning: Contains spoilers for The Alienist

We don’t meet Anthony Comstock in The Alienist until John Moore and Dr. Kreizler are taken at gunpoint to the meeting with church officials and former Police Superintendent Thomas Byrnes at the financier J. P. Morgan’s mansion. At this meeting we discover that Comstock has been among those trying to hinder progress in the investigation. While Byrnes’ opposition related to a concern that the team’s methods may threaten his legacy, and church officials feared an uprising of the immigrant population, Comstock’s opposition was rooted in his fear that through becoming “actively involved in civic affairs,” Dr. Kreizler would “spread unrest by discrediting the values of the American family and society.” Specifically, he believed that Dr. Kreizler’s theory of context “speaks against freedom, against responsibility,” and is ultimately “un-American.” In Comstock’s view, the investigation therefore needed to be stopped because if the team were to succeed, Dr. Kreizler’s dangerous ideas “might gain greater credence.” (For more on this, see Part Two of the 17th Street blog about the themes of The Alienist.)

Even though J. P. Morgan is convinced by Dr. Kreizler’s arguments in favour of continuing the investigation, he explains to Kreizler and John that he believes, “Byrnes will continue to harass you, in an effort to preserve the methods and organization he has spent so many years establishing. And he will have Comstock’s support.” True to this prediction, the team continues to be tailed as they go on with the investigation. However, it quickly becomes apparent that although Byrnes and Comstock may have originally been responsible for having the team followed, neither individual may now be calling all the shots. Even John is surprised by an attack they receive while on the road. Kreizler is convinced that Comstock is behind the attack, but John disagrees: “Long-range assassins don’t really seem like Comstock’s style, though.” How much blame can therefore be attributed to Comstock for the events that follow in the novel is unclear.

Sources and further reading: Kenneth T. Jackson (Ed.), “The Encyclopaedia of New York City” (1995), Wilbur R. Miller (Ed.), “The Social History of Crime and Punishment in America: An Encyclopedia” (2012), and Luc Sante, “Low Life: Lures and Snares of Old New York” (1991).

Thomas Byrnes, New York’s Premier Detective

Last year I began the slow process of completing the supporting character profiles for the historical figures that appear in The Alienist. To do this, I have aimed to read at least one biography for each of these figures to aid me in completing their profile. While this proved to be a fascinating process for the first figure on my list, Police Superintendent Thomas Byrnes, it has resulted in my putting together a considerably longer profile than I had originally intended! As a result, I have only posted a summary of Byrnes’ role in the novel on the supporting characters list, and have decided to post his full character profile here instead as a history blog. So, if you are interested in learning more about this complex and interesting character, please read on. For any interested visitors, you can find the sources used in putting together this profile at the conclusion of the blog.

Early Life and Career

Although Thomas Byrnes, former Police Superintendent and Chief Inspector of the Detective Bureau, only appears in The Alienist on one occasion, he plays a prominent role in the novel behind the scenes and is mentioned a number of times throughout the text. Born in Ireland in 1842, Thomas arrived in New York City as a 10 year old when his family fled the Potato Famine, and grew up in the notorious Five Points district. When his father began drinking heavily and walked out on the family following the death of Thomas’ younger brother, Thomas and his mother were left to fend for themselves. To help them get by, Father Coogan of St. Patrick’s Cathedral managed to obtain a position for Thomas as helper in a firehouse, while his mother worked as a seamstress and his two sisters found employment as house maids. Even though Thomas had never been formally schooled, Father Coogan helped in this as well by providing his young charge with books for self-education.

When the Civil War broke out in 1861, 19 year old Thomas joined Ellsworth’s Zouaves, the Eleventh New York Volunteer Infantry Regiment, and served during the Battle of Bull Run. He did not otherwise see much combat during his two years in the Union Army, and returned to New York following his discharge from the service in 1863. Shortly after this, he joined the New York City Police Department as a patrolman, and saw his first major action when the draft riots broke out. During the riots, in which a mob of Irish immigrants caused nearly $3 million of damage to the city and killed eighteen men during a week long spree following the first military draft, Thomas was recognised for his valiant efforts to protect the 233 children in the Orphan Asylum for Coloured Children, as well as assisting Police Superintendent John A. Kennedy who had been violently attacked and was lucky to escape with his life. Byrnes quickly rose through the ranks during the period that followed, becoming a Sergeant in 1869 and Captain of the Fifteenth Precinct in 1870 at only 28 years of age.

Byrnes’ posting in the Fifteenth Precinct undoubtedly helped his remarkable rise from Captain to Chief Inspector of the Detective Bureau during the ten years that followed. During his time as Captain, Byrnes investigated a myriad of cases ranging from petty theft to murder, and his name appeared in newspaper crime reports on an almost weekly basis. None of his cases, however, were was as well-publicised as the Manhattan Savings Institution heist of 1878. The robbery remains one of the greatest in New York’s history, with $3 million in bonds and cash (over $50 million in today’s dollars) stolen from the bank’s vault. During the long and complex investigation that followed, Byrnes successfully identified most of the culprits but there was a frustrating lack of convictions in the case due to the suspected bribery of jurors. Even so, the case helped to cement Byrnes’ reputation as an unrelenting crime fighter willing to go to any lengths to protect the interests of New York’s wealthiest citizens.

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